Thursday, June 23, 2011

A DIVINE INTERVENTION!


Last night there was a loud knock on my dream doors
While I was in a flurry of heavy snores 

Standing in the front was something bizarre
Beaming such strong light, it looked like a huge star

There came in the lord and gave me a dirty stare
Bombarded with confusion I was in full glare

 Red in anger, he looked like loaded with a complaint
In fear of the extraordinary, I looked like I was about to faint 

With piercing light as his wings he sat on the couch and I ran to press his feet
His anger surfaced and he became serene hence calling defeat 

He took my hands in his with the greatest love and affection
Assured me that all my problems had solutions 

Heart he said I had of gold
But anger always gave it a mold

He looked at me and asked me “what all is this?”
“How can u spoil everything u wish?”

He made me sit with him like his best buddy
Threw light on the patch of life which was really gooey and muddy 

He told me that I had the greatest power i.e. the strength to care
To have command you do not always have to be the mayor

He nudged me to go to you and ask you why is it so wrong if all we did was right?
Why were we never a team but always indulged in a fight?

Let’s be like we were again considering the lord’s order
For ours is right at the death border

We both were hurt and we both cared
We always came back to each other after each fight we shared

The void u made is still guarded
You just have to step in and the first rank will be again awarded 

Never did I make a friend like you
Never ever will I further want to 

I know I lost that position from your life
But I could always give it a strong fight

I can’t live with guilt of not trying
And I have to stop my excessive emotions from this torturous frying 

It still hurts to be away
Just a second’s contact from you makes me sway 

I can’t live anymore in puzzles
For if a team we completely dazzle

If this is climbing everest
Let’s try and give our best 

I can ignore u like I did all this while
But then how will it spice up my bland life? 

I am happy but still sad
For after addiction to good there was disastrous bad 

If this feels silly let it go
If it makes sense open up in front of me like you were before...

4 comments:

  1. the best writers wrote not with their pen and ink but with their soul and blood ....
    the best stories never came out of imagination but from experience...

    love d way u xpress :)

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  2. kudos!!
    very well written,as true as ever,here emotions are on a roll, great work my friend, m so proud of u:)

    ....now all i wish is that it really gets into someone's "genius" mind.

    Snehil

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  3. A plethora of emotions gushing thru the veins...
    an agonised heart...not pumping blood but pain...!!

    Each word is an echo of ur heart beat...crystal clear...!! I hope the echo is heard before it fades...

    Hats-off...!! <3

    Manasvi.

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  4. @ manji
    Full on! hehehe

    @ snehil
    I wonder if u r SO PROUD of me because of writin this little thing, how proud would u b if i go to the moon or end up climbing Everest :P

    @ Manasvi
    Generally echoes are heard and ignored :)
    But some things in life do deserve a fair trail.
    If things do not change then also then they were clearly "delusional" hence they will see the correct ending (rude,harsh and very very brash) :)

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